well...
the thing about using an instrument like this one is that it's not gonna work well in a major progression. Like the imagery i'm getting from this is a bunch of shirtless hardstyle fans skipping on beat moving there arms back and forth like a jig with really angry faces... it just ends up looking lame and doesn't fit at all.
basically if you added some variation in this as far as drums and stuff goes, and just change the chord progression to minor, you wouldn't have gotten a zero.
2/5 not all that bad.